Script: First Draft

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Establishing shots.

Leader (L) at the archway.

Strong willed (SW) character walking through her location.

Cuts to SW going to punch her guard and being restrained and taken to work in harsher conditions (outside).

Shots of her working.

Shots of L working.

Shots of intelligent (I) character working.

SW character thinking.

L walking.

Fast paced shots of I fixing things.

Fast paced, close up shots of the guards.

Running montage, flitting between characters.

SW’s guard is knocked out.

Security camera scenes.

SW’s guard is talking to her when she pushes him over and runs away, looking back from a distance.

She approaches the door.

L approaches door.

I working on something, becomes annoyed, throws equipment.

I approaches door

They all exit.

L is talked but pushes the guard down and runs away.

L’s guard leans against a tree, head bleeding.

SW is running, pursued by her guard.

I and his guard fall to the floor, I gets up but the guard remains on the floor.

He slowly wakes and gets up.

Flashback montage, happy memories.

They run to meet each other and embrace.

They turn to face out.

I running, cutting between establishing shots that are empty of the cast but relate to the flashbacks.
SW running, runs through a puddle.

I with a nose bleed.

More of the previously mentioned establishing shots.

Excessive blood.

L running, cuts as per the others.

They look for the guards: 360 shot, with pauses focusing on each reaction.

SW points.

The guards emerge from the trees running: all angles.

Shot of SW pointing from a different angle.

Repeats of the happy flashbacks, but different moments.




Some say he’s half man half fish, others say he’s more of a seventy/thirty split. Either way he’s a fishy bastard.

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